About Me

PLAYING WITH WORDS AS SOME MAY CALL IT...yes i do,play with words...just as a kid with colours,scribble his thoughts on a paper,yet colourful it is...its fun for him,and just a drawing for others...its meaningful to him,and creativity for others.. I might not be too good at it,but perfection is not what i write for..its satisfaction i seek..am unheard..and it makes me weak.. I AM A HUMAN..not perfect...no halo on my head,but still m harmless... I am a self respecting,determined and laughter lover....funny as my friends call me..am in true sense a "joker".. I can be imprudent,impulsive..and wild coz am not a tamed lioness.;)

Sunday, February 17, 2008

Maut..!


Sunsaan kala raasta..

Tezi se jaate hum
Band hoti aankhen
Aur shareer se pal pal nikalta dum..

Raaste ke aas paas kharhe log..
Sab jaane pehchaane..
Kisi waqt saath hua karte the
Ab parlok mein the unke thikaane..

dekhkar waapis murhna chaha
darr se main ghabraa gaya
khud ko rokne ki koshish ki
par iik roshni ki ore main khichtaa chala gaya..

zindagi ki dor ko haathon se choot te paya
sab sapno ko..mere apno ko maine bikharta paya
saanson ki larhi ko ek ek karke toot ta paya
mere apno ki pukaar ko mere kano se dheere dheere door hota paya

koi himmat,koi zor kaam nahi aata..
koi dua,koi ashirwaad kaam nahi aata..
antim samay mein insaan ka dharm kaam nahi aata

meri khudaayi ne jab mera raasta roka..
tab hosh aayi aur aansuon se bhara ikk manzar jo paya
rote hue log,shok aur tanhayi..
main hairaan,pareshaan..ankhen khuli,khud ko gumsum sa paya
zindagi ki dhoop chaon bhi manzoor hai ab..
bas door rahe mujhse ye MAUT ka kala saya..

7 comments:

डाॅ रामजी गिरि said...

Too vivid n sensitive poetic lines depicting d cold truth of life n death.

Gyaan Guru said...

bas door rahe mujhse ye MAUT ka kala saya..

Poem to padhi lekin kuch samajh nahi aaya...

Woh zinda hai ya khudko usne maraa paaya...

Mayaa... teri to mai palat dunga kaaya (gulshan grover from Khiladiyon ka Khiladi)

Unknown said...

vry sensitive but depressing too
yet it is the bitter truth of everyone's life

Anonymous said...

Very mature Poem .I really liked it . Keep it up...... ALL THE BEST

अमिय प्रसून मल्लिक said...

The good one but too much of pessimistic notes.
Is it possible to beget a more interesting side of poesy by taking only zeal notes?????????

डॉ .अनुराग said...

kuch udaas ,kuch khamosh aor kuch samvedna liye hue.....

Unknown said...

Many Comments

Have a nice day!